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Caramels Story Part 7 by DespisedAndBeloved Caramels Story Part 7 by DespisedAndBeloved
Here the next part of "Caramel's Story"
Sorry that it took so long but I did put a lot of work into it.


Part 1:fav.me/d46qqez
Part 2:fav.me/d49allw
Part 3:fav.me/d4aa3of
Part 4:fav.me/d4bwqvd
Part 5:fav.me/d4fpag1
Part 6:fav.me/d4j9gvp
Part 7: You are here
Part 8:fav.me/d4sve0n
Part 9:fav.me/d4zwjxi
Part 10:fav.me/d52tr18
Part 11:fav.me/d5czwea
Part 12:fav.me/d5svha3
Part 13: fav.me/d73v3h8
Part 14: fav.me/d7tjayw

Story By::iconcaramelmlp:
Art and Dialog By::icondespisedandbeloved:

Caramel wants to look his best for his first day on his new job at Sweet Apple Acres but It doesn't look like Applejack is too happy with outside help. Plus she doesn't remember Caramel...

I know shame on me for making a heartbreaking comic a day before Valentines Day but I'll make it up to guys.


If there are any grammar or spelling mistakes, please help me correct them. I go through this thing so many times that I could miss the simplest thing.

Applejack, Caramel, Big Macintosh, Lyra (Heartstring), Bon Bon, and Written Script ©Hasbro
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic©:iconfyre-flye: & Studio B
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:iconaho4464:
AhO4464 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
Well that didn't turn out as well as I thought it would be :O Poor Mac and Caramel :hug:
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Rule #1 never go behind Applejack's back
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:iconaho4464:
AhO4464 Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2015
Yèah, she almost made me have a Number #2!!! Almost...:P
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Student Digital Artist
XD
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:iconaho4464:
AhO4464 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015
I am so glad I have a lot of emergency pants :XD:
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:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014
The pain. The feels. Poor Caramel.
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Jul 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I know ;-;
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:icondoctorwholovesthe80s:
Doctorwholovesthe80s Featured By Owner Nov 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
He sees Applejack with love sparkle vision!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
The power of love can do that :p
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:icondoctorwholovesthe80s:
Doctorwholovesthe80s Featured By Owner Dec 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:^D
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:icongonzo22:
gonzo22 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2012
caramel must think applejack is prettiest when she mad
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Sep 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well to be honest, I think Caramel think she the prettiest all the time XD
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:iconkittycreator:
KittyCreator Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Caramel needs a bunch of hugs :c
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's true ;~;
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:iconthundercracker417:
Thundercracker417 Featured By Owner Aug 5, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
D:

Okay, Caramel needs TWO hugs now.
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Caramel needs all the hugs :c
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:iconthundercracker417:
Thundercracker417 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
And he shall have all of them

:hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug::hug:
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yay! Caramel has been hugged!
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:iconthundercracker417:
Thundercracker417 Featured By Owner Aug 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
:w00t: Success!
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:iconopdeverent:
Opdeverent Featured By Owner Jul 11, 2012
...
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
o:
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:iconsonazelover132:
sonazelover132 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
i'm one Carameljack fan! i love that two sooo muuuch
:iconapplejackplz:
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yay! *high hoof*
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:iconsonazelover132:
sonazelover132 Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012
here :[link]
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
ohhhh yeah he made that one a while back. I already read it. He actually had it on DA before. I believe the writer :iconcaramelmlp: inspire some of it since they're friends.

But they're both different. I do like reading his interpretation though, I'm still waiting for the third chapter :D

They're also several others fanfic that have Caramel coming from Manehattan. The only one that was before the comic series I drew was :iconpatroison: "Down Manehattan" [link] which was requested by :iconcaramelmlp: XD

but thank you very much for sending the link. I wish there were more Carameljack fanfics out there
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:iconsonazelover132:
sonazelover132 Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012
woah....i think i saw this story somewhere in FF
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Really? If you find it again can you link me?
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:iconjenna1204:
jenna1204 Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
brushie brushie?
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
A silly noise for brushing XD
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:iconjenna1204:
jenna1204 Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Aw..man...i feel bad for him...
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner May 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
He'll keep trying

Thanks for reading :D
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:iconsyiren:
Syiren Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ouch, that's gotta be a slap in the face. She doesn't even remember him and here he had gone through so much remembering her.
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner May 15, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's sad but Caramel will do his best to help her remember
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:iconaqomxg:
AqomXG Featured By Owner May 10, 2012
Poor Caramel
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I know ;.;
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:iconzebulonsmiley:
ZebulonSmiley Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
You know, I see common trends in shipping, something I've experienced in my own life too: "Pining away", which is waiting and waiting for someone to wait for you, instead of figuring "hey, they have their own lives to live and figure out, and I'll put the feelings asside for now". I see Caramel did that quite well. It's easy to do, to hope the one you like will just wait for you, but it can be a sad route to follow.
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2012  Student Digital Artist
It's sad but true. I experience something similar to that as well.
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:iconzebulonsmiley:
ZebulonSmiley Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
*nods* Oh well. We live and learn.
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Student Digital Artist
ain't that the truth
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:iconzebulonsmiley:
ZebulonSmiley Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2012  Hobbyist Artist
Yep. ^^
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:iconcrossover-lover56:
Crossover-lover56 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Hey hey calm down Applejack Whats gotten into you?
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Give it some time, she just angry that Big Macintosh went behind her back and hired someone out of the family.
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:iconcrossover-lover56:
Crossover-lover56 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Oh no! Not forgetness! D:
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I know :c
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:iconsjart117:
SJArt117 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Aww! So sad! Im so eager to read part 8, and the rest!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Why thank you very much for taking interests in the story. I'm currently working on part 8 :D
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:iconsjart117:
SJArt117 Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I can't wait for it! Alongside all the other fans commenting!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Yay! I'm so glad, it might be out later today :D
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:iconsjart117:
SJArt117 Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
No way! Awwwesome!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
:D
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