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Caramel's Story Part 11 by DespisedAndBeloved Caramel's Story Part 11 by DespisedAndBeloved
The long awaited part 11!

I really hope you all enjoy this since this was a week and half long project! I kid you not!

Maybe this is not EQD worthy but I hope you all on Deviantart enjoy this comic which I work on with my blood, sweat, and tears....well mostly sweat and tears XD

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Part 11: You are here!
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Part 13: fav.me/d73v3h8
Part 14: fav.me/d7tjayw

Story By::iconcaramelmlp:
Art and Dialog By::icondespisedandbeloved:

Caramel awakes to find himself staring at a young filly. Surprised, he falls off the bed. The young filly runs to go tell her sister that Caramel has awaken. Caramel wonders where he is at and finds himself in Applejack's room. He panics as Applejack trots slowly into the room that he closes his eyes in fear of getting yelled at. He soon realize that Applejack is giving him a hug! Applejack soon apologize and ask him to stay as a farm hoof full time. Is this a dream? Has Caramel finally got what his heart desire, a chance to be more with the mare he loves?

So yeah here's part 11, now don't expect a part anytime soon. Might have a big commission to fill out in the near future.

Check out some of the stuff that was created by me for this comic

Applejack's Room Background by DespisedAndBelovedApplejack's Room Backgroung 2 by DespisedAndBelovedPicture Frames by DespisedAndBeloved

If there are any grammar or spelling mistakes, please help me correct them. I go through this thing so many times that I could miss the simplest thing. Plus I'm no English major and I work my butt off getting this done that I miss small things here and there.
EDIT!Changed a spelling issue, thanks Thundercracker417 and tarynsgate
EDIT 2! Had to take the Mane6 picture out because of continuity issues ^^;


Apple Bloom, Applejack, and Caramel©Hasbro
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic©:iconfyre-flye: & DHX Media
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:iconaho4464:
AhO4464 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
WOO HOOO!!!! YEAH BABY!!! VICOTRY DANCE!!!! :dance:....Ummm Uh I mean, (in the voice of a japanese sensei) well done young stallion, well done. 😏

P.S: Don't worry, I won't speak in that voice in the future pages.
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Apr 17, 2015  Student Digital Artist
Awweeee but Sensei can't go T-T how will we know what to do?! D:
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:iconaho4464:
AhO4464 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2015
Well if you really want sensei back, then I ain't going no where!!!! ;)
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2015  Student Digital Artist
:iconfluttershyyayplz::iconsaysplz:Yay!
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:iconaho4464:
AhO4464 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2015
Especially for Fluttershy-San ;)
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:iconsuperlink1425:
superlink1425 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student Artist
Dawwwe XD
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thank you c:
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:iconpunkrocksavedmylife:
punkrocksavedmylife Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
Didn't notice before but panel 24 where she's saying "That's what-" is deserving of a :icondatplotplz:
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Hahahahaha I'm sure that what Caramel was thinking XD
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:iconpunkrocksavedmylife:
punkrocksavedmylife Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013
oh definitely B-)
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:icondoctorwholovesthe80s:
She hugged him! Clap 
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I know! Great for him! c:
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:iconsjart117:
SJArt117 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh how I've missed reading you!

This is ace!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much ^-^
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:icondaisykitty123:
DaisyKitty123 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
I have to admit, picture number 20 kind of freaked me out... sorry? xD Im just being honest... but its not like ill EVEEERRR get a picture done even close to as well as you do it :D I really love picture number 22... they r so cute!!! :D i am very very VERY impressed :) keep up the good work!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
That's alright X3

Thank you very much, that means a lot c:
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:icondaisykitty123:
DaisyKitty123 Featured By Owner Jan 28, 2013
:D
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:iconbb-k:
BB-K Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeap, mighty impressed. :)
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much ^-^
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:iconmich0000:
Mich0000 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
MOREEEEEEEEEEE ...please? =3
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Currently in the works.
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:iconmich0000:
Mich0000 Featured By Owner Jan 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
yay! = D take your time i can wait as long as needed = ) *sits patiently*
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Well I do have a progress bar on my page. Currently the sketches are all done. Now it's just everything else XD
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:iconandrewstillnight:
AndrewStillnight Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Moar?
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yes, I will be working on in sometime this month c:
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:iconcolomba1:
colomba1 Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
continue pleaceeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I shall but sadly it won't be out till sometime in January, I hope. The writer had a tough year so it will be a while. I'm sorry for any inconvenience.
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:iconcolomba1:
colomba1 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
but sumit little parts before janyary pleace!!!!!!!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Student Digital Artist
but there's only one more day in December D:
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:iconcolomba1:
colomba1 Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
well.. happy new year! (: never hurts(:
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Happy New Years to you too c:
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:iconcolomba1:
colomba1 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
c:
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:iconfiacool:
fiacool Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012
MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
There will be in January, at least that's what I'm planning. The writer had a tough year so we apologize for any inconvenience.
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:iconsashauna11:
sashauna11 Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012
noo makee more
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 24, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I will, and I'm sorry that I haven't in a while. The writer had a tough year. But we've plan on getting the next one out in January. Again I'm sorry for any inconvenience.
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AllPoniesAllTheTime Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
I will admit, I hate this Shipping but I LOVE this Comic!! :D Great Work!! :)
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well I'm really glad that you enjoy the comic even though you're not for the shipping. Thank you very much ^-^
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:iconallponiesallthetime:
AllPoniesAllTheTime Featured By Owner Dec 8, 2012
Your welcome!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
^-^
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:iconfrankieg2233:
FrankieG2233 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Things are moving all up for Caramel! I can't wait to see how this story ends = ]
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
There are and thank you very much ^-^

Sadly the writers is going through some tough times so I won't be able to make another part till January.
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:iconfrankieg2233:
FrankieG2233 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Good things come in good time :D
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:iconhaileym45:
HaileyM45 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2012
FINISH IT PLEEEAAASE!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'll do the best I can, sadly the writer is going through some tough times and I won't be able to get it done till January. I'm so sorry :c

But thank you very much for being interested in the series. ^-^
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:iconhaileym45:
HaileyM45 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
It's just left at a REALLY big cliff hanger. >.<
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I know and I'm so sorry about that. It wasn't my intent to leave it like this. But it will be awhile till I can get the next one out. Again I'm so sorry about that :c
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:iconhaileym45:
HaileyM45 Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2012
It's alright. It's not your fault.
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Thank you ^-^
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:iconhaileym45:
HaileyM45 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2012
Your welcome!
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