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Caramel's Story Part 11 by DespisedAndBeloved Caramel's Story Part 11 by DespisedAndBeloved
The long awaited part 11!

I really hope you all enjoy this since this was a week and half long project! I kid you not!

Maybe this is not EQD worthy but I hope you all on Deviantart enjoy this comic which I work on with my blood, sweat, and tears....well mostly sweat and tears XD

Part 1:[link]
Part 2:[link]
Part 3:[link]
Part 4:[link]
Part 5:[link]
Part 6:[link]
Part 7:[link]
Part 8:[link]
Part 9:[link]
Part 10: [link]
Part 11: You are here!
Part 12:[link]

Story By::iconcaramelmlp:
Art and Dialog By::icondespisedandbeloved:

Caramel awakes to find himself staring at a young filly. Surprised, he falls off the bed. The young filly runs to go tell her sister that Caramel has awaken. Caramel wonders where he is at and finds himself in Applejack's room. He panics as Applejack trots slowly into the room that he closes his eyes in fear of getting yelled at. He soon realize that Applejack is giving him a hug! Applejack soon apologize and ask him to stay as a farm hoof full time. Is this a dream? Has Caramel finally got what his heart desire, a chance to be more with the mare he loves?

So yeah here's part 11, now don't expect a part anytime soon. Might have a big commission to fill out in the near future.

Check out some of the stuff that was created by me for this comic

If there are any grammar or spelling mistakes, please help me correct them. I go through this thing so many times that I could miss the simplest thing. Plus I'm no English major and I work my butt off getting this done that I miss small things here and there.
EDIT!Changed a spelling issue, thanks ~Thundercracker417 and ~tarynsgate
EDIT 2! Had to take the Mane6 picture out because of continuity issues ^^;

Apple Bloom, Applejack, and Caramel©Hasbro
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic©:iconfyre-flye: & DHX Media
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superlink1425 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student Artist
Dawwwe XD
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thank you c:
punkrocksavedmylife Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
Didn't notice before but panel 24 where she's saying "That's what-" is deserving of a :icondatplotplz:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Hahahahaha I'm sure that what Caramel was thinking XD
punkrocksavedmylife Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013
oh definitely B-)
She hugged him! Clap 
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I know! Great for him! c:
SJArt117 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Oh how I've missed reading you!

This is ace!
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Thank you very much ^-^
DaisyKitty123 Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013
I have to admit, picture number 20 kind of freaked me out... sorry? xD Im just being honest... but its not like ill EVEEERRR get a picture done even close to as well as you do it :D I really love picture number 22... they r so cute!!! :D i am very very VERY impressed :) keep up the good work!
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