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Caramel's Story Part 10 by DespisedAndBeloved Caramel's Story Part 10 by DespisedAndBeloved
...this took me days to finished. I stayed up all night! From 8 PM to 4:39 AM...and the base color was done before I even started! But it was worth it to see this finished before I leave tomorrow (Saturday)

Part 1:fav.me/d46qqez
Part 2:fav.me/d49allw
Part 3:fav.me/d4aa3of
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Part 8:fav.me/d4sve0n
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Part 10: You are here!
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Part 12:fav.me/d5svha3
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Part 14: fav.me/d7tjayw

Story By::iconcaramelmlp:
Art and Dialog By::icondespisedandbeloved:

Feeling bad for holding the apple family back, Caramel decides to get in a head start. With hardly any sleep, he struggles to get everything done...Due to the extensive labor and lack of sleep, he passes out. Applejack awakes to find most of the labors has been completed for the day. Shocked, she looks for the pony responsible for this. She then notice Caramel lying on the floor, but what gave her a real shock was the fact that he now has a cutie mark!

The cutie mark sound was hard to replicate in text format so please be easy of me ;.;

Alright I'm going to bed...I think I deserve it no? If there is anything wrong with this, please forgive me. The heat drained my energy and I stayed up all night working on this. I wouldn't be surprise if there's errors.

If there are any grammar or spelling mistakes, please help me correct them. I go through this thing so many times that I could miss the simplest thing.
EDIT! Thank Tonboko for the correction


Applejack and Caramel©Hasbro
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic©:iconfyre-flye: & DHX Media
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:iconaho4464:
AhO4464 Featured By Owner Feb 7, 2015
(In the head of the unconscious Caramel, my face eppears in the clouds as a mental  illusion, I spoke in the voice of a wise veteran Japanese Sensei) Wèll done young stallion, you have managed to pass the first step of you're rite of passage. You have managed to unearth the Mule of Wisdomely Stubborness within you and used it quite skillfully, even when the beloved mare of you're life bluntly put you down. You have not done it alone however, you have gratefully accepted the dedicated generosity of the mare's older brother. But despite you're supportive alliance, it is also you yourself that has kept yourself going! And for that you have ranged you're cutie mark, which resembles horseshoes to symbolize you're dedication to work for your gains. There will be more to come, but for now treasure your current prize before you face more challenges that await you. You will need a relaxing and well earned time off before you continue tracking down the real prize you truly seek. Farewell young Caramel, and good luck!....(starts to fade away) I will be watching your prooooogresssssssssssssssssss (my head disappears into the clouds)
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:iconilovemyfavoritegames:
ilovemyfavoritegames Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2015  Hobbyist Writer
oh horse apples
caramel are you alright?
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2015  Student Digital Artist
He's fine...probably 
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:iconponyuniverse:
PonyUniverse Featured By Owner Oct 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YAYY! :D :D
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Thanks c:
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:iconawesomewarriorcat131:
I can't see it for some reason!?
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Sep 27, 2014  Student Digital Artist
This one always gave me problems when uploading, have you try downloading it? I think that may be the only way to see it right now
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:iconawesomewarriorcat131:
Kk
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:icon1cosmiconsciousness:
1cosmiconsciousness Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014
Yay, Caramel. He's okay, right?
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Jul 12, 2014  Student Digital Artist
Yeah, just exhausted xD
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:iconsuperlink1425:
superlink1425 Featured By Owner Apr 10, 2014  Student Artist
he did it he got it DAT cutie mark!!X) XO YAY!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Apr 13, 2014  Student Digital Artist
After so long, yes x3
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:iconsuperlink1425:
superlink1425 Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014  Student Artist
XD
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:iconpunkrocksavedmylife:
punkrocksavedmylife Featured By Owner Dec 11, 2013
More like lying on the ground rather than floor, what the description is saying. :)
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Very true X3
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:icondoctorwholovesthe80s:
HOORAY!!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Huzzah! x3
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:iconpaulinaghost:
paulinaghost Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013
Embarrassingly enough I didn't realize he didn't have a cute mark until I read the description.
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Aww no worries, at least you didn't rage at me as some people did about their is no cutie mark XD
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:iconpaulinaghost:
paulinaghost Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2013
I would think some cutie marks for meant for mature jobs like business,science,and other stuff would take a while to appear until a pony is mature enough in the body and brain.Not something that odd to see it would take a while for things like that to be realized.

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:icondarth-silas:
Darth-Silas Featured By Owner Oct 22, 2013   Artist
What is Caramel's talent supposed to be?
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Well I cannot say, but it up to the reader's imagination.
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:icondarth-silas:
Darth-Silas Featured By Owner Oct 24, 2013   Artist
Maybe it represents more of a personality trait than a specific talent. His luck did go from good, to bad, to good again. An up-turned horseshoe hung on a wall means good luck, but upside-down means the luck will run out.
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Ooo interesting concept, I love it!
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:icondarth-silas:
Darth-Silas Featured By Owner Oct 30, 2013   Artist
I think someone else came up with it, not me. Might have read it on the MLP wiki.
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:iconwolfwarrior01:
WolfWarrior01 Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
D:
Crap. The image won't show up for me. I've tried refreshing - nothing - opening the image in a new tab - it said the deviation couldn't be found - and saving it, but it said there was no file. ;n;
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Oct 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Did you try the download button on the side? I'll try to re upload it when I get the time but you can try looking on it on derpibooru derpibooru.org/27900?scope=scp…

sorry about that, I don't know why it's being stupid ^^; 
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:icongonzo22:
gonzo22 Featured By Owner Sep 23, 2013
in panel 2 it looks like caramel made a visit to the mirror pond
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Sep 24, 2013  Student Digital Artist
haha yeah it does. Well it was supposed to show the passive of time. I'm trying out new things.
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:icondoodlepops33505:
Doodlepops33505 Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Student Digital Artist
:iconexcitedpinkielaplz: HIS CUTIE MARK!!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Aug 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yay! Now he's no longer a blank flank! 
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:iconeiectraumatic:
eIectraumatic Featured By Owner May 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
His cutie mark!!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Student Digital Artist
He finally got it! Hooray!
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:icongilgasmash:
gilgasmash Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013
yay! he got his cutie mark! ^^
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Yes! After so many years he finally earned it! This call for a celebration!
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:iconsonazelover132:
sonazelover132 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012
MMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEE OR YOU'LL MAKE BAKIE CRY!!!!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Well the next part is being work on and I hope to have out sometime this week ^^;

Thank you very much for taking interests in the series
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:iconspritefizz:
SpriteFizz Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
What do you mean to be continued? Isnt this supposed to be the end?
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
There's more to come so that's why it said to be continue ^^;
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:iconspritefizz:
SpriteFizz Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
ohhhhhh
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:iconsonicx25975:
sonicx25975 Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012
MORE MORE MOOOOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWW
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm currently working on the sketches ^^;

but it might not be done till the end of the week...but no guarantees.

Thank you very much for taking interest in the series ^-^
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:iconlionkingismylife:
LionKingIsMyLife Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Student General Artist
NEED MAWR. MAWR CARAMEL;S STORY.
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Currently working on it. Will take a while though, hopefully by the end of the week but no guarantee. Going to be a long one ^^;

Thank you very much for having interests in the series :D
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:iconlionkingismylife:
LionKingIsMyLife Featured By Owner Aug 21, 2012  Student General Artist
YAAAY.

No problemo! Your stories are good!
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Aug 25, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I'm glad you think so :D
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:iconsmileeme34:
smileeme34 Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2012  Student Artist
PLEASE TELL M AJ REMEMBERS HIM NOW,
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:icondespisedandbeloved:
DespisedAndBeloved Featured By Owner Aug 11, 2012  Student Digital Artist
I can't say sadly ^^;
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:iconsmileeme34:
smileeme34 Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Artist
Darn...sigh,theres going to be a love triangle isn't there?
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